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I wish it would end

The world has become such a dismal place

I just wish that for once things could go right

I've totally given up on love

Never again will I try

I gave love

But the love was never returned

Well it might not be love

But it sure was something I liked

The feeling was so great

I suppose that it was never meant to be

"Darling" I don't mean you

I'm talking about someone else

I wish this crazy world would end

I wish it would end and so would I

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~I am having a bad day. I want to die.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 3:48am
©12 May 2004 - 2:37am — snaps
4 August 2004 - 3:06am — Justin (not verified)
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This poem startled me a little but i still liked it.

15 May 2004 - 8:44pm — Zach Schmid (not verified)
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hey this is a good piece of writing so don't be down on yourself. looks like your anger or bad day has produced an awesome poem. keep it up.

13 May 2004 - 2:07am — snaps
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Kill me

12 May 2004 - 12:24pm — Darling (not verified)
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At least you don't mean me. It's nice of you to put me in your poem, but it is so depressing. I'd hate for the world to end, because then I would no longer have you to look at. Ta-ta!

Love,
Darling