call it quits

If it cant stand let it fall, memories, stories take em all

 

So shut your mouth say no more, lets cut it now no farewell tour

 

The house built is now a shell, purgatory is worse than straight to hell

 

 Once its over my pain will subside, lets do it now please don’t hide

 

No anger in me just regret, can forgive but fuck forget  

 

You gave up long ago, lets sever the ties now let me go

 

If you see me walking in awhile, keep on going try not to smile  

 

 

I can feel a tear bout to drop, lets end it now time to stop 

 

too bad future is hard to see, cause you were such a drain on me 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

first poem i have ever written, haha promise 

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    Amongst your regret at

 

 

Amongst your regret at the end of a relationship a person can detect in the poem the will and determination to move on, which is good. Enjoyed reading your poem, well written read and the rhyming underlines your determination in this poem. 


 

 

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