I loved you a little too much.
Well, a lot too much.
When you treated me badly,
I would say “No more!
This is the last time I see you.”
Then in our separation,
I’d begin to remember the times
We were happy together.
When we would dance,
And yell and laugh wildly.
When we did not care
What anyone thought about
Our public displays.
And so I’d go back to you,
As exes tend to do.
I never saw your smirk saying
“I knew you’d be back!”
Maybe I did though,
And chose to ignore it
Because I knew I would be too.
Sometimes too, I was bored
And knew your company
Would pass the time.
And so, over and over,
We parted ways and
Came back together,
Like a stream in drought.
Until finally, after years
Of intertwining and untangling
I said “No more!”
And this time I actually
felt the weight of the words
Behind me, and
Felt the anvil of you
Unshackle from around my ankles.
Although the content is heart
Although the content is heart rending, the poem, as a poem, is beautiful.
Starward
Agreed
Sometimes liberation waits behind pain.
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.
I’m diabetic
My "You" is sugar and carbs. Cool write. ~S~
Thanks
I think my 'you' is excess and moderation is difficult to master
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.