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I feel so alone.
Abandon by the word and everyone in it.
Unexceptable and rejected by my family.
It hurts so much.
The pain fills my life.
The agony of living life alone is too much for me to bare.
I long for someone to hold me.
For someone to care enough to know me.
But no one does.
No one cares.
No one would miss me if I never returned.
There would be no gaping hole.
No one would care.
Very nice ! Welcome to PostPoems.God bless.Happy journey
Very nice ! Welcome to PostPoems.God bless.Happy journey
©bishu
Your poem expresses a person
Your poem expresses a person apathetic about their very self. It is sad to think there are so many people out there who think so little of themselves..but it is true. On the other hand, just think of all the company someone like he person you write about has...if only they opened their eyes and could stop wallowing for a few....
Great write!
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
You obviously didn't read
You obviously didn't read what I wrote if you think what I wrote "expresses a person that is apathetic with there very self".
Your other comments while interesting, are your opinion and don't apply to what I wrote ether.
Oh, well, thank you for your
Oh, well, thank you for your reply. :-)
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
they would care. I feel it
they would care. I feel it seems its easier to be away from you. I wonder what mayhem you might have caused? could it be that tact could be lacking? you are different from core values held sacred in your family? are they a bunch of mean people who just reject you for no reason? does it hurt enough to want to change it, even for a little while? or is being you so important that this is happily something you suffer. I seems like your general 'I cant see any other way' poem. but the truth is you can. but do you want to? Its an ok poem. thanks for sharing. cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
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