My legs haven't been so heavy
I'm a drag and a half over the top
Still pulling my weight this day
While I really should be sleeping
Everything's so loud right now
The ground won't stop shaking
These masks and these grins for me
All the while, I shouldn't be here
I'm taking it in and shoving it away
Coughing it up and blowing it out
Puking sympathetics on the fly
And I'm just so fucking tired
Lights trail as we sputter by
From miles away I smell something sweet
A laugh I find intoxicating
This poor boy really should be sleeping
But something subtle just stabbed me in the back
Someone unfriendly just punched me in the gut
A little bit of everything just made me skip a beat
Quite a lot of nothing just shut me down completely
And here we began, young man sitting and staring
The lights are bright and the scene wants to rumble
When a certain special somebody sweeps up the pieces
And assembles them into something prettier than before
A technical wizard with her lips and with her eyes
Some kind of sweet aroma stops me from dozing
This is the moment, this is the spectacle
And I'm grateful that I'm still not sleeping
That was the day I met a slap in the face
A harsh blast of cold, cool air
Everything fell into motion and into scheme
When I was introduced to the she set just for me
At once we're experiencing
Seeing, believing, loving and living
And the beauty of it is
I don't feel like sleeping
Especially not when she's around.
It's a strange world when an old slam poet like me knows who Kilik is (sorry, though, Ivy's my girl). I thought to myself, "That CAN'T be what I think it is!" Anyway, I thought I'd go ahead and comment on this one, because from what I can see so far you've got an extraordinary talent working here . . . keep honing your technique. Poetry's sorta like driving Helios' chariot . . . don't let your attention wander too much, or you'll burn up or freeze.