The Past #1

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In the Past

There's a limit to the turbulence today

A way to stifle the increasing delay

Small shards of the answer tumble into place

Something coherent screaming in your face

All things considered the pieces fit quite well

The slivers are content to rest where they fell

We may be bleeding but damn it we're glad

We're smart enough to know when we've been had

I'm a fool and a lover and I worry as it is

When I feel happy I panic and I panic as I live

But I can build things mighty and pointed and tall

A super bit of something that'll blow a hole in the wall

Yet sadly I'm fragile, and as weak as can be

I need a certain sensible female to make something out of me

At a certain point I was able to break free

Things in perspective aren't as bad as they seem

Her lips, her eyes, those hips and those sighs

It's all we can do to keep our feelings right

And for nothing less than a bit of our time,

we'll be able to keep this thing of ours alive.



And here comes another love song.






Author's Notes/Comments: 

A pretty girl is like a melody.

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i like the poem. i don't think you're a fool.

you're a great writer. keep up the writing. never let anyone tell you that you can't write a poem, cuz it'd be a lie.

i'm the one who commented on your "stoner" poem, just different account info, cuz this guy named afzal shauq won't leave me alone.