So dark and so lonely it seems,
it's hard to see the light that gleams.
You're in this place of sadness and fear,
it's tough to let anyone to come near.
But you would like someone to hold you,
someone to understand and get you through.
People don't seem to like you or understand,
so you're all alone and wonder, is this the plan?
You show all the emotions and want to have aggression,
you know you would do anything to get out of this depression.
This is sooo true! I was reading over some of your work its really good, dont stop writting!!
Mina
Wow, yes this is a powerful piece. I really like the words you chose to use in your rhyming, it's intuitive and enlightening, keep up the good fight!!