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A Decision
Sometimes I wonder did I make the right choice,
with every decision the things that I voice.
It's hard to know what's really wrong or right,
when people say different things, share different lights.
Who to trust, who to believe,
when we all are human and set to decieve?
This world can be so confusing at times,
I just wish sometimes I could get a good sign.
Whether I'm doing okay or not at all,
but all I got to go on is myself and the law.
So with everything inside of me it seems like fission,
everytime I make a decision.
Congratulations on your portfolio of poetry. You seem to be putting a lot of effort into the poetry that you do, and a lot of heart. Might I suggest the use of more disjointed lines and less sing-songy words? I think it would work well with you in the experiences that you write about. Thank you for your continued support of the PostPoems website!
-Gertrude
Just go with your heart! If you are really trying to do right, you will know when you err! That "little voice" inside (conscience)will tell you!
Good thought! Thanks for sharing!
this poem is really good....keep it up!