Footnote: Simile, 2

My soul is like the
sea's shore. Her footprints mark the
sand: no toe cleavage;
she wore sheer stockings with her
sundress; casually shoeless.

 

 

Kyakuchuu

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Simile as Sand

I enjoyed walking around with this soul leaving prints in sand...interesting choice of comparison set...full of sun and air...at rest between corporeal entity activity...nice ~~Lady A~~


 

 

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Many thanks

I appreciate such kind words from a Poet of your stature and accomplishment.


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