I hate him
How could I ever
have liked him?
How could I have ever
considered him a person?
He disgusts me.
Making those vicious comments
that just aren't funny.
Why did I ever
like him?
I guess I was blind.
Now I can see
exactly who
the asshole is.
Now he has lost
and his competitor
has won.
ouch my heart goes out to whoever this is about. I can relate to an extent but i believe this to be a little too harsh HIM really isn't as bad as you make him out to be. Yes, granted his comments are misplaced and even if they were put in the right context would be immature. Yet you should not hate anyone. Hopefully this poem is a momentary feeling because if it is not than there are problems that you have to deal with. Best of luck in your ventures and i wish to see more tame enteries in the future.
- Martin Jefferies -
POWERFUL PIECE