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Cosmic Love
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01. My Love Is Forever Once in a blue moon true love finds you.
When our eyes met, I knew this was true.
Like a shooting star falling from the skies,
I fell for your smile and the look in your eyes.
My heart a supernova of emotion,
My soul an aurora of devotion,
My thoughts soaring through a galaxy of cosmic love,
We shine brighter than any planet above.
You are my starlight and my moonlight,
My every wish shining so brightly in the night.
Orbiting each other like the Earth around the sun,
There's no doubt in my mind that you are my only one.
"an aurora of devotion" Now
"an aurora of devotion" Now that's gold!
Your entire cosmic dance of love has a skyrocketing movement that underscores the fervent emotion. I was really feeling it from start to finish, and with galactic references and word choices that plant images of luminescence in the reader's mind, I never wanted to land.
A lyrical, heart-gripping, deftly-written excursion.
For nearly five decades I
For nearly five decades I have loved Poetry, especially astronomical Poetry, and this poem is magnificent in its use of astronomical imagery to convey the declaration of love. And you have given these lines a very successful rhyme pattern as well. I cannot remember any other astronomical poem quite like this one; I believe it is unique in my entire reading experience. I applaud your accomplishment.
Starward