I used to know a girl who always got what she wanted,
she had the looks and knew how to flaunt it,
daily i felt taunted laying back to back,
saying nothing but praying something made me act,
for an angel she is surely a mess,
dresses in leggings and low tops when i'm dressed my best,
doesn't need to be impressed, she wants to but doesn't know,
cause she'll never allow any nice guys to show,
all you know is all you want to do is hold her,
but you'll never take a chance and grow bolder,
what i told her was that i would back away,
but what i do won't nearly be the same,
not just a dame, some girl or another,
you possess an attraction i've felt for no other,
maybe one day you'll know exactly what it is that you want,
until then i won't allow you to continue to taunt.
your poems take on a breathy
your poems take on a breathy form..keep up the good work, nice imagery and rhyme scheme!
good lines and good rhymes
good lines and good rhymes should be allowed to breathe together :) thanks for the comment
can you hear me now?