please, chase your fate
and do be brave
as though it is
the latest step
that you can take
on here and there
because it's fair
and you may dare...
the life is story of some soul
and audacity of men
who had once dared to
chase their fate
will speak for them
and will inspire
the other mate to hit the gate...
the gate is way to catch
the light
which grant you wings
and ease the strain
so that the life becomes
your aim to feel the joy
to love your friends
and day by day
to chase your fate...
hey,,,
It's a really good poem you have alot of talent. Dear NInja sir, dont be so harsh maybe hes definition of soul mate is different than yours? he has already told us that he isnt native maybe its used differently where he is from. You say that you're for spreading positiveness, what are you doing here then? none of that sounded possitive to me. Let me end by saying Shumic I look forward to seeing more of your work. =.]
~ Tinyy