Sweat cover's your body and mine
we have left all limit's of our
self control.
From the rythm, our heart's
making love passionately, the two
of us together.
Slowly moving all over the place,
feeling the motion, gasping for breath,
our bodies creating a mind of their own.
More! More! More! Not letting go, no
second to waste from this sexual
heeling.
The sensation of release, upon
both, we are one in one together
as our bodie's proceed to pour
out what we've held in so long,
you and I together, beyond all limit's!
Thereafter realizing we have went
beyond the limit's of our self control,
loving every single minute.
Author's Notes/Comments:
WOW!! Our self control has completely over done itself in the poem above.
And in reality our self control can easily slip as much, chances even more, if we are not careful??? Do we even want to be careful with such temptation, as described in the poem???
Nancy:
This poem is so so romantic yet also so erotic and sensuos. Truly loved this poem. Your visual skills in this erotic poetic masterpiece is truly amazing. You truly poured your heart into this gem and it shows. Wow!!!!Thank you for sharing with me Nancy and have a very beautiful and safe weekend.
Regards,
Dave Richardson
12/15/2003
great poem! shows a lot of compassion and i love it. good job