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Sinking
Why am i feeling like this?
Why can't i stop myself from thinking?
that i'm falling into a bottomless pit
of darkness and i'm sinking
to the bottom of the ocean where
i'm drowning in my own tears of sorrow
and i can see the light above me
but i have no desire to see tomorrow
like i've given up on living
the way the world gave up on me
they never even gave me a chance
i'm lost somewhere in misery
for once, i would like to be appreciated
just for being there
i'd like someone to ask me how i'm feeling
and listen like they care
i want someone to jump in and rescue me
you know the saying, misery loves company
what i really want to know
can someone ever love me?
can someone miss a doormat?
can you live without your stepping stone?
i know you just want to get to the top
but you might have to do it alone
because i can't stop myself from feeling like this
and i sure can't stop myself from thinking
lately, it's like i'm falling into a bottomless pit
or darkness and i'm sinking
hi there!! this is very moving this one. I love the line about drowing in an ocean of your own tears, like it me! But surely you`re happier than this poem portrays!?! lovely work none the less. thanks for the comment, `She Goes On` is possibly going to be our first ever single! it`s not on our myspace profile because it got moved because of new songs coming in. i think there`s an old live version on www.myspace.com/ourfold2 though. thanks again, keep scribbling! x