Snow drops on a beautiful red rose
With morning dew,
Giving it a heavenly glamour
So much tempting and so much beautiful
Urging her to pluck the only rose,
She sees among the crystal white snow.
But how did she ever forget?
About the wild thorns hidden within
That will cause her so much pain
That will even take her life away…
Nothing is beautiful as it seems
Because no one sees the danger within
"Nothing is beautiful as it seems
Because no one sees the danger within" were my favorite lines.
This was beautifully written and I don't see anything wrong with it. :)
--Aden