Unfold Mystery (Part-1)

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She took a seat near the open window-
Absent minded, she was looking through.
What is happening all around her?
She was unable them to consider.
Staring at a green play ground-
Watching everything that she found!
Yet she couldn’t guess anything there,
Cause her mind was filled with fear.
Turbid eyes wanted to say something,
Shivering lips couldn’t utter anything.
A man saw it and came beside her,
He was worried observing the matter.
The man asked, what happened to you?
Please tell me everything that’s true.
She tried to look at this stranger-
Tried to guess if he was a pretender.
He again asked her, are you ill?
Why are you sitting alone still?
She blinked her eyes, hearing this-
Linking her thoughts by a bridge.
She tried to smile but couldn’t say,
Her eyes shone in the evening ray!
The man then came, sat beside her,
So that she could then feel better.
She looked at ground, bending head,
Her silence can be compared to dead!
He requested her, please look at me,
Tell me everything, please feel free.
I promise to help you all the way,
I’ll try to sweep out your pain away.
Then her eyes were filled with tear,
They filled with pain, instead of fear.
He consoled her saying, don’t cry-
Weep out tear drops from your eye.
She tried to speak but made no sound,
Her gloomy face had made him astound.
He put his hand, on her back, and said-
Your situations have made me afraid.
Then she gave him a piece of paper-
He looked at it, which was a letter.
The girl wrote her story inside it,
Didn’t know that her lover was cheat.
She put her right hand on her womb-
Her story also made the man dumb!
He tried to utter some soothing word-
Panic cut his heart just as a sword!
What could he say, knowing the history,
Now he understands her unfold mystery.

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13th February 2008

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RainDreams's picture

i like this one, i was very intrigued with the woman and wanted to know what happened to her. good choice of descriptive words and kept my attention till the end.

Cherisse U's picture

first part excellent so far.
tried reading who. and didn't understand it.

Reese Renee's picture

Pretty good so far..