Copper Liquid

Quicker than the speed of sound
Gushing torrents, deafening sound,
Birthing twirls, dancing foam
Cracking whips,
are horse-drawn waves.
Down the mountainous boulders brave
Past each cove and inlet go,
‘til spread-eagled wings aflow
Onward out and forward flow
Does this river, rain-stormed go.

© Sharon-Elizabeth Walker, 2012

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~~~crackling whips are the

~~~crackling whips are the horse drawn waves - I dream of writing like that! - Lady A


 

 

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You are soo kind

Thankyou Lady A, you are soo kind. Although it sounds corny? I only create my poetry when I 'feel inspired' to write. I've writeen 3,500 to date lol


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