Sometimes it feels like I'm suffocating

you take my breath away.

Sometimes you're my only ray of sunshine

to this raining day.

You bring a smile to my frowing face

you captivate me with your undying gaze.

A gleam of hope to save this pain

You keep me from going insane.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a poem I wrote to Andy..

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Shana is a rockstar poet!!! She really has a way with expressing herself, her emotions, feelings in a way that people can really relate to in their everyday life. I love all of her poems. I wish I could critique each one, but just know that she's got something really special. Girl, you are ONE OF A KIND!! love ya!!