Sometimes it feels like I'm suffocating
you take my breath away.
Sometimes you're my only ray of sunshine
to this raining day.
You bring a smile to my frowing face
you captivate me with your undying gaze.
A gleam of hope to save this pain
You keep me from going insane.
Shana is a rockstar poet!!! She really has a way with expressing herself, her emotions, feelings in a way that people can really relate to in their everyday life. I love all of her poems. I wish I could critique each one, but just know that she's got something really special. Girl, you are ONE OF A KIND!! love ya!!
April