Broken

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Secular Poetry

Your song echoes within this empty room-

I hear your voice and my knees quake-

Broken images of long-lost mem'ries

Flutter across my shattered mind.

Wrap my heart in walls of steel-

Drown my soul in tears that fall-

Empty thoughts and broken dreams

Lie scattered beneath my feet.

Despair overcomes my broken soul-

Trembling, I find there is no escape

From this fear that torments me-

Hold me as this wretched darkness falls

Kiss me one last, glorious time

As I fade into death's dark embrace.

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~written 10/29/04-11/1/04

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fighter4life's picture

Excellent poem, I see you wrote it in october and not november, oh well. Great poem nonetheless.

Blind Mans Pawn's picture

This a beautiful but sad poem, I love the flow and the imigery, the cold that I feel melded into it. You're a great writter and I hope you'll keep it up, though hopefully you shall find some happpiness and that can spread to your work.
best of luck in life and writting,
Blind.