Your song echoes within this empty room-
I hear your voice and my knees quake-
Broken images of long-lost mem'ries
Flutter across my shattered mind.
Wrap my heart in walls of steel-
Drown my soul in tears that fall-
Empty thoughts and broken dreams
Lie scattered beneath my feet.
Despair overcomes my broken soul-
Trembling, I find there is no escape
From this fear that torments me-
Hold me as this wretched darkness falls
Kiss me one last, glorious time
As I fade into death's dark embrace.
Excellent poem, I see you wrote it in october and not november, oh well. Great poem nonetheless.
This a beautiful but sad poem, I love the flow and the imigery, the cold that I feel melded into it. You're a great writter and I hope you'll keep it up, though hopefully you shall find some happpiness and that can spread to your work.
best of luck in life and writting,
Blind.