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Surrendering Of Heart

she tried to move,

but only fell down,

finding her heart inside

was about to drown



from days before,

remembering well

how every night,

she felt like hell



is this love?

or obsession?

or fear of new love

with a sense of depression?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

In a way, this poem is about me.  It's about a girl who likes someone new, and wants to have a new relationship, but is restricted by her feelings for her first love

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 3:08am
©13 April 2002 - 6:01pm — shadowdragonfly
29 December 2002 - 6:30am — ontheverge
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Mmm... I can relate to this one... nicely written, you've got talent. Keep on writin.
- Lo Ruhamah

14 April 2002 - 11:18pm — J Mac (not verified)
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I really like this poem you have written, very good flow. A true and personal feeling is felt from this piece.

30 November 2003 - 5:30am — poetvg
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SWEET PIECE
you go girl
take up for
your man .
I would to .