Duality

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2009

Two within and one without

which speaks the truth

which one I'll doubt?

One to live

one wish to die

learned to kill

the urge to cry

Falling down

one picks me up

Fighting still

one makes the cut

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Afzal Shauq's picture

what a sweet written poem with very much rich idea and the way you did is enough impressive too.. meaningful poem is this one..i went through of your more poems adn found you a good poet... hope you love my peace thoughts too if go through...I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and 7th is in pilpe line to come..your long comments will be apprecaited and will be part of that book..need your long and strong words support to my peace cause in the globe...