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2006 In these nights we are together
admiring the patterns of the shadows
the lamplight through the branches of the trees
the feel of the green grass painted black
beneath our backs as we gaze at the stars
sharing butterfly kisses and love bites
in the gathering darkness
In these sweet summer nights
I'm full of life and love for you
And every soft breath you take
every quiet word you speak
the look in your luminous blue eyes
seems full of meaning
and I remember why I fell in love with you
Not bad at all, I feel you've captured the feeling well. Perhaps too many adjectives?