I am an angel stripped of his wings
bearing scars I cannot hide-
the mark of the beast
Salvation doesn't know my name
Salvation doesn't come for me
Salvation cast me away
And now I sleep on a bed of nails
swimming in and out of dreams
And everything I see is grey
Tell me what it means
Tears for the past
A rose for the dead
The deceptive smile on my lips
Scatter the ashes
then breathe until
you breathe no more
If you want beauty
you won't find it here
nor will you find love
You want redemption
but you cannot even
survive the fall
Come with me-
Bury your dreams
and make sure
you bury them deep
Come-
crucify the angels
if you dare
Tear off their wings
Drive the nails into their palms
as Heaven did with me
Come-
Scatter the ashes
and breathe no more
If one is damned then
aren't we all
And I'll weep for you
as long as you weep for me
and drink my tears
as we watch the angels
falling from the sky
and realize Hell is a
paradise of another kind
built in shades of grey
Very nice work. There are not a whole lot of people who can write a tolerable poem that has no rhyme, but you pull it off wonderfully. Your words paint a vivid image that anyones imagination can atttain. Yet it still has depth. Keep it up, and you'll go far.