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Mr. Poet

what madness drove you to believe

you can hold the stars?












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last updated 12 October 2010 - 3:01am
©9 June 2003 - 2:05am — serene
11 May 2006 - 7:06am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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though I think you piece is interesting it does not hold 5/7/5 meter

17 July 2003 - 9:11pm — saiom
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i heard in meditation Yogananda say
THE STAR OF INDIA IS WITHIN YOU

you are truly gifted
.. jewels drop off your pen