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TO BELONG
looking in
from the outside
lurking shadows
i wish to be
in the light
to be inside
and belong
a warm smile
to be counted
amongst the group
as i peek
outside
i never want
to step out
looks cold
out there.
For Daisy: Thanks Dais for the comment. ^_^ But you know what? The last two lines are my favorites, I actually wrote those two before the middle lines. Iba iba siguro rhythm natin, salamat talaga sa pagbasa. ^_^ Belle
very good lines. though i was distracted at the last ones, "it's cold out there." i don't know if it is the rhythm, the tone, or the words. the last lines shall, in my opinion, bite some more.
I stopped by to read few of yours since you were kind enough to visit my site and comment. This poem was perfect for what I have been thinking about. Write me at bluesky@inet75.com if you have a chance and I'll tell you about it. Enjoyed this one greatly, V.