Thunder in a stormy night
Amidst the tempest oh so wild
Never leaving this muddy site
To hug the tombstone in your heart
As the wind begins to mourn
Piercing anguished heart in two
Forever you will be
A solitary figure under this tree
The wisps of her hair
The softness of her hands
Her perfume lingers
The memories she left behind
Though she’ll never hear you say
Still you utter that love and care
Thunder in a stormy night
Amidst the tempest oh so wild.
AWESOME PIECE
It's very dramatic, the scene you have created. Really good, open, imagery.
This paints a cool visual. good job!