you are what I am looking for,
I see you clearly
I feel you completely,
you are just beside me.
your presence always hovers around me
never leaving, never failing
you know how I love the rain
the majesty of the mountains
the meadows and the flowing rivers.
the beachwalk, the sunset
you cherish them too.
counting the stars and smiling at the moon
it illuminates my Being.
enthralled by nature’s beauty
we walk hand in hand,
I am lifted high up the velvety clouds.
my feet meet the ground and I
left the bench mentally painting you.
I rest in the sanctuary of my thoughts and promised,
tomorrow, I shall hold your hand again.
i was going to say...i like any poem starting w/the word "whiff" silly...
truly, it IS a good poem and very sweet love story.
j.
beautifully written... mystic touch of sensual spirit... nice poem. eric
Liked this one. ANy poem w/"whiff" in the title has got to be unique!! ha ha
You won my heart when you said, "The majesty of the mountains." I felt deep emotion and recognized great imagery in all your poems. I'll be back for more. Sincerely, Mary Charest
...and what a wonderful dream too! I love this one! Keep up the good work. Regards Donkerman
Ah, yes! The elusive soul mate. I'm still searching for mine too. Very lovely poem.
A very loving poem, with more fantastic imagery, and a smooth flowing style that accents the deep emotions!!