On Davenport Island

Off the coast of ease

I've wandered across lemonade sky for a time

thought marshmallow meadows sultry breeze

gentle poofs

A release

Where might I ask is the moon dancer tonight?

Are the spirits cold inside refridgerator faces?

Warm up for the band

Warm up to the cue

Traveling along licorice bank-drops

The silence is the space

the noise is you

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Beatnik1979's picture

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last four lines are my favourite, but only because the others create the mindspace to really visualize the thought..Poetry that asks the reader a question...adds to the effect of engaging and adds to this poem nicely man. Excellent, Mr. Jones

schmuckjones's picture

Thank you Beatnik

It's something like a daydream.  :)

allets's picture

"...warm up to the cue..."

Oh stop! Just melt my heart tonight - a lyric to listen to while vine swinging between comets and stars and other "noise is you" Island items ~ xoxox - Lady A
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Thank you very much Stella!