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Forbidden Love
Torrents of tears engulf my heart
Falling from eyes that weep tears
Tangled are the webs we weave
When times are hard to conceive
How this aching heart doth grieve
For it cries out its painful whimper
Softly tears in rippling rainfalls tumble
Slowly flowing in unending streams
Painful is the anguished soul of mine
Reaching to a love that’s out of reach
Trembling is my suffering lonely heart
As it harkens for it’s soul mate's plea
Streaming tears for a forbidden love
An empty heart within empty arms
My body’s unending ache of desire
Fills me with an everlasting yearning
Bathed in thoughts of eternal dreams
I find myself longing for your love
beautiful work .
your images tumble like water over rocks... sadness, longing, the need for love. well expressed. eric
I loved the words you used in this piece,I only wish you had written more on to it...I really enjoyed it.
A beautiful, although sad, poem, written with an incredible flow, and with a rare depth of honest emotion......Your words drip like honey, yet are also hard to swallow due to the pain expressed.... To me, NO love is forbidden, for love is the only true value of consequence, and nothing should be placed as more important!!! I hope you realize your desires with your soulmate, if this be your true Soulmate, for each only has one true, destined Soulmate, and to let anything stand in the way of such a love is the definiton of "insanity" itself!!! Wonderful writing!!
A single word : Wow !! A really really moving poem. It is not rhymed but the music of it is very very well balanced, a scream, a cry...wow. Keep going on ! Love. Vincent.