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Forsaken - II
I began to think about my past
The time which was not so pleasant
A falling tear from my eye
Said it all about my present
I wiped my tears like every time
And thought something that I haven't
I smiled and looked up in the sky
With hope to see next errand
I would offer the same critique as I gave in Forsaken I.
Poetry is personnal so the meaning of the poem is not always as important as the presentation. The smoother the words flow, the more sophisticated the presentation. Again you did a great job.