On this day
The angels stand still
not a sound comes from the heavens up above
A sad soul in their youth
Another person dies
but not completely past,
the Death toll booth.
I can se it in her eyes
all the sadness and the pain
Her young mind frozen
gone nearly insane.
shes there at the gate
and struggling for life,
but her time has not yet come
she knows the horrible truth
She cannot go past
the death toll booth.
I look at her
there on the floor
she knows thinks shes nothing anymore.
I close my eyes
and say a prayer
that this girls pain
would just disapear.
I then look inside
the mirror across the room
And suddenly realize
this girls horrible doom
Her life will be ended
way too soon,
But this will be kept from me to you.
But i know that the next time
I wont be stopped
The death toll booth
never gives the test twice
so i leave you with a small amount of advice.
The 1st time you try
to pass the booth
you may not succeed
but the next,
you will.
I really thought this was good, and whoever doesn't understand it should be shot. I could personally see this girl lying on the floors. I am always happy to read a poem about anothers dismay. Although, sometimes, some may not understand, but all you have to do is go on, and find those of us who do. Keep on writing and never give up on your dreams....
Peace, love and *Adverb*