Failure

Hurting of a terror filled soul
Breaking in many ways
A skilled builder could never rebuild a shattered soul
Imagination slipping
The stresses of a piece descending
A tyrant of life
Destroying any form of release
The pain of the failing imagination
Incoming feelings of failure
Failure to produce
Failure to create
Failure to write
A creation tied in a soul
Bricked in by a wall
No release
No escape
The need of an opening
To allow the imagination free
A need for the fingers of creation to create
No support from those near
Only support is of Sacrifices angel
Redemption
The creation of a story
Creation of the dream
An imagination needing Redemption
To be free like a bird
Freedom
To overcome the feelings of failure
Breaking the wall
A will to overcome such fate
To use the dead of night to create
Breaking through
Restarting this faith of writing
Resurrecting the dream
To get the words back on the paper
Writing a dream in a night
All I need to break the wall.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just a poem of me and my struggle for the night of having to complete something

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Wow... that is amazing...

Wow... that is amazing... even if it was something to do, that is an amazing poem and I can feel with it because I go through and feel the same thing.


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