The Flight of Hel

The rage inside me

Drowned in a pool of nightmareish visions

Despressive nature of this inclosed world

Entrance into the neverafter is closer than ever

Looking across this corrupted world

Not many can see the world as I do

Most think that they live a life made for them by another

Somethink that the are born, they live and die in a cycle

Others find that they are on this god forsaken plain to make sure the others live happy while they suffer

Hiding the true personnality behind a mask

A mask can shatter

Usually the shattering is the death of the wearer

Pain

That is all i feel here

Dispair

Is also felt here

Depression

A major part of this despessive pool or images

Not many would understand me or this

They feel the pain of this place

I feel her near me

A deserted angel

Redemption is flown away she has been taken from this world

Just I remain with Hel

Hel a member of the forgotten everafter such as Sacrifce

Hel and Sacrifice the hauntings of our souls

Suffering on this plain

Hel keeping myself from the edge

Helping

The limitations of our reach

Both knowing more than we have ever given others

A bond that is formed between people of the neverafter

The neverafter this place of depressive nightmares

Hel was made for a reason

To keep Sacrifice alive as was he for her

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written for Sarah

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