The rage inside me
Drowned in a pool of nightmareish visions
Despressive nature of this inclosed world
Entrance into the neverafter is closer than ever
Looking across this corrupted world
Not many can see the world as I do
Most think that they live a life made for them by another
Somethink that the are born, they live and die in a cycle
Others find that they are on this god forsaken plain to make sure the others live happy while they suffer
Hiding the true personnality behind a mask
A mask can shatter
Usually the shattering is the death of the wearer
Pain
That is all i feel here
Dispair
Is also felt here
Depression
A major part of this despessive pool or images
Not many would understand me or this
They feel the pain of this place
I feel her near me
A deserted angel
Redemption is flown away she has been taken from this world
Just I remain with Hel
Hel a member of the forgotten everafter such as Sacrifce
Hel and Sacrifice the hauntings of our souls
Suffering on this plain
Hel keeping myself from the edge
Helping
The limitations of our reach
Both knowing more than we have ever given others
A bond that is formed between people of the neverafter
The neverafter this place of depressive nightmares
Hel was made for a reason
To keep Sacrifice alive as was he for her
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