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I have loved to the point of madness*
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2014
Maybe it was the air today
Or the words we chose
Or the lack of a solid breakfast
It was just….
Off
Like teeth slowly aging over time
Thin filmy coatings leaving yellow stains on our chemistry
We’re smoking
You and I
Taking tiny hits of nicotine and calling them friendship
But its not
Its just cigarettes
Smoke and mirrors
Leaving tiny yellow stains on nicotine conversations
You are a master at capturing
You are a master at capturing a moment in a relationship, freezing it, letting us examine it; always so personal, yet universal that my own memories often intertwine. Simply excellent Dear!
:)
thank you my dear! its good to have you reading again :)
Much Love
Ashley
my goodness! this is great
my goodness! this is great
:)
shucks
thanks love
Much Love
Ashley
Thank you Respected RWR for introducing FS ":)
©bishu
:)
its a good quote no?
Much Love
Ashley
Undoubtedly a wonderful quote Respected RWR !!!!!
Undoubtedly a wonderful quote Respected RWR !!!!!
©bishu
great stuff that lovely
great stuff that lovely madness! GREAT WRITE! HUGSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
shucks :)
thank you my dear :) sometimes...I just feel more like a writer than a person...you know?
Much Love
Ashley
Oh I know babe. I know for
Oh I know babe. I know for sure. hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Excellent poem
This was executed brilliantly. A great poet uses words to create an arrangement, an excellent poet carefully selects those words to create a vivid image. You are ( by far) the latter. I particularly enjoyed the wording of line 7. Well done!
:) *blushing*
thank you, I don't know what to say to that other than thank you :)
Much Love
Ashley