A critique of a writer's soul...

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2013

 

We are poets before our time

Feeling what the masses will only let in later

When the night is down like a soft blanket covering their over stressed minds

When it is safe to know how 'genuine' feels

Then they will accept what seemed too forward of us to say

Take it in and reply 'that was wise'

Because we are poets before our time

Screaming "ICE BURG!" to the captain of society

Embracing the fact that we will sink beneath the waves watching as the life boats fill

Knowing that when they reach the shore they will look back and wish they had listened

Because we are poets before our time

And readers after our moment has passed

 

 

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SSmoothie's picture

Soul critic yeah awesome, you

Soul critic yeah awesome, you just as awesome but beautifully different! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks smoothie   I am

:) thanks smoothie

 

I am excited to get the reading with rabbits page going, soul is a spoken word poet, so posting some videos of him reading will be so much fun!


Much Love

Ashley

bishu's picture

Great writing !1

Truthfully good !! Your writing is inspiration for us beginners. 


©bishu 

 

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thank you but this poem

:) thank you

 

this poem would not be possible were it not for the line which inspired it, provided by soulcriticpoet "we are poets before our time"...we can all inspire one another regardless of how long we have bene writing :)


Much Love

Ashley

Jesster's picture

Nice!

Nice!


Copyright © JessterStarshine

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) 

:) 


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Ashley

nightlight1220's picture

Excellent.

Excellent.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks go read soul's

:) thanks

go read soul's stuff if yu get a chance


Much Love

Ashley

SoulKritiC's picture

Humbled!

Beautiful! simply beautiful...#speechless! *tear*


SoulKritiC

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks for the inspiration

:) thanks for the inspiration my dear


Much Love

Ashley