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It’s still fresh right
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2016
It’s still fresh!?!
FUCK YOU!
It is six God damn years old
It is not fresh
It is rotten
It is maggot ridden
Flea bitten
Fly filled pain
It’s been growing mould beneath the surface of my skin since the day I dropped that foetus into the toilet and just because last night was the first fuckin time that you called it our baby doesn’t mean it’s fresh
It just means that now
it finally hurts the way
it always should have
Fresh?
It's a matter of perspective ent it?
I mean, cosmically, it's still fresh, right?
Theoretically, freshness can be preserved.
"It is maggot ridden
Flea bitten
Fly filled pain"
I do love me a good rabbit rant ;)
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
<3
yes I supose all life is perspective ;)
I do love me a solid RoC comment!
Much Love
Ashley
such naked words layed out on
such naked words layed out on the table with nothing hidded as other speek quietly at the table the words of your poem made me think of this
:) thanks for the read!
:) thanks for the read!
Much Love
Ashley
Ouch this one is a biter!
Ouch this one is a biter! Rant away I crown the mistress of rant in line for the throne! Anger is grief recognising the source.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
yea...
bitter was in there too
Much Love
Ashley
Incredible... The emotion in
Incredible... The emotion in this is staggering. I adore you.
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
<3
I don't know how to reply to that...except you know that feeling you get when a writer you truly respect, who always blows you away with their work, says something really kind about your work...its like that but on fire...
Much Love
Ashley