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KAMAKOZE
They say that opportunity's waiting
On the other side of the door.
I say i'm on a Kamakoze mission
Straight to the floor.
I'm getting nowhere fast,and i'm headed straight down,
And i don't trust what's in my head.
And it's a long hard road with a heavy load
That makes me sometimes wish i were dead.
And i want off this rollercoaster.
I think i'm gonna cry.
I can't stand these ups and downs,
They remind me too much of my life.
I'd rather be on a merry-go-round.
At least i'd know when it ends,
I'll be right back where i started from,
And have another chance to begin again.
I'm pretty good at understanding poorly spelled garbage. I can usually infer what word the writer is trying to spell by the context. It still took me a good five minutes to understand what the hell you meant by Kamakoze.
It's Kamikaze. Kamikaze is the word you were looking for. It's in the dictionary of any modern spell checker. It would have taken 3 seconds of your life to fix, and considering you're posting retarded poems on the internet time is something you have in abundance.
I'd like to review your lame poem, but I still can't get over that word.
This is one poem that actually reflects what it's talking about. I felt like jumping out of my window with the monitor in my arms and plummeting 18 stories to my death so that the other 3 people in my apartment wouldn't accidentally stumble in and read your poem.
Funny how a rollercoaster reminds you of your life, and not the other way around.
Also, if you're going to borrow words from other cultures to describe something, learn how to spell them right. KamIkAze is the Japanese pilot trained to make a suicidal crash attack. "Kamakoze" makes me feel like I should be getting comfortable with punctuation.