Oh, Twilight of Midnight,
So lonely and still,
I stare at your face
And all that I see
Is depression and sadness
Just aching to be relieved.
Dying for the reunion
That would bring you comfort.
You have lost something,
But it is not your best friend.
It is your very own self,
Your very own soul.
You are not the same.
It’s as though someone ripped out your beating heart
And replaced it with an ice-cold stone.
So it just sits there in your chest,
Still and without a beat,
Without life.
You, oh Twilight of Midnight, think back to the time
That you made sweet love to the starry skies.
But where are your starry skies now?
They hide behind the clouds.
Truly, I feel your lifelessness.
I look out upon you and find myself staring in a mirror.
And all your sorrow, depression, sadness,
Flows through my eyes
And into my very soul.
And I have found a kindred spirit.
Let me do us both the favor
Of wishing death’s triumphal victory over our existences.
Surely, we are overcome.
Wow
This was amazing work, you could feel the sorrow and see how the skies were actually you. I just loved this.
Twylight of Midnight
Very good writing and awash with feelings. The over intensity of the characters feelings aptly compared to being overcome by night skies immensity. Loved your poem.
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