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My Guardian Angel
Darkness surrounds me, I can't find the light.
A voice tells me to stop and give up the fight.
But I ignore them and run, trying to find my way.
And as I run I look around to see a sign of day.
When I'm ready to give up I get down on my knees,
And pray to the heavens to help my pain to ease.
Then a light shines above me and a person appears.
And with their soft voice takes away all my fears.
It is my Guardian Angel, who I know I can rely on.
And now that they are here,the darkness has gone.
wow, such a beautiful poem this is. i didnt know you could write this well! it may only be one poem, but it is a really good one which makes all of the difference in the world. VERY good rhythm and i really like the words you used. i especially liked "When I'm ready to give up I get down on my knees, And pray to the heavens to help my pain to ease." so beautiful... good job alyssa!
your soul sis,
~Lizzi~
perhaps it's luck... your God/ Goddess... or maybe your best friends... either way keep believing if it works for you... you have friends in high places that look out for you and hold you up when you don't even know it hehe...
perhaps such as someone who would leave a critique like this :P