Godless Love

Just a point of view,

a

fragrant facade as

we see the pretty flowers

slide under the door

of

opinions formed from

half-“truths”

only to open this door,

these convenient

suppositions

and stare at the twisted

monster, a way of life

we helped build,

a way of belief that

stares

right back

at us.

Taunting us,

catering to our inner fears

and promising

solutions,

joys of paradise

that distract us from the

shackles we let

our beast

slip quietly on our wrists,

(our free will).

And w/our own hands,

slide on the blinders .

Yet,

listen to the silent rain,

the cries of those who

truly care,

the weeping of children

seeking love and nurturing

not just by God,

but by us;

we of mortal flesh

crave the sanctity,

the holiness,

the very blessing

of our own humanity.

And

always,

w/blinders off,



real love.

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poetvg's picture

beautiful work

Melissa Sanders's picture

This is interesting. It's written well and you've painted some very good mental pictures in my mind. Well done! ~Melissa

Caroligné Terentius's picture

Thought-provoking.

Mtngoddess_0's picture

I find it interesting that this theme runs a global circle, we can find it in all religions, and from so-called atheist too. Love. The only true unifyer, the only true freedom. That simple, but a lifetime to understand.
Excellent, Thank You!

Angela Albee's picture

I absolutely love this one...

Puanani Sandabar's picture

You're a good man, Mr Stryker. This is a wonderful poem....a real wake-up call. Kudos.... ...P :)