Creation

Let's create something new
Let's create someting for just me and you
No more back and forth
Prevent me from walking out that door

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A Real Story

Personal and succinct, as always, but it is rich with what has occurred, what has been shouted and condemned, what was good and salvagable - nice, I like it lots - LOL - Lady A


 

 

RobertKalilainen22.'s picture

i try to be to the point,

i try to be to the point, because love shouldn't be a game, there should never be a confusing moment or a questionable moment. if you love somebody, let them knwo and get to the point. don't dance around it, Love is our strongest weapon, but we use it unwisely. we need to express how we truly feel. wether it be heartache, depression, love lust, confusion or lost in complete darkness. i love the cliches because they are so simple but so powerful all at the same time. people have been using these cliches for many years, and they have yet to fail. you tell me to create my own words and my own "cliches" but isn't love the biggest cliche of all? i absoultely love the idea of love and the amount of power that it brings, so by me writing these cliches i am able to get my true feelings out in a matter that the reader can understand and hopefully relate to.


Robert Kalilainen

Morningglory's picture

Liked the poem. Also

Liked the poem. Also appreciated reading your comment. Though, I think sometimes it does get confusing but that's just part of getting to know one another on the deepest levels.


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