You try so hard but life smacks you down,
Life laughs at you as you try to climb to your feet.
But as you have a grip on the ledge
It is pulled away letting you fall again.
Then it kicks you, and kicks you till you bleed from the mouth.
Till you have almost no life left.
You think it has left you for dead
But it’s all a sick joke.
It’ll wait till you stand up and dust off.
Then without warning it will beat your knees,
Until you fall upon them bloodied and bashed.
It then stands tall above you and mocks.
It does this until your mind breaks.
All ration turns to madness.
All hope fades.
All energy is drained.
You kneel as a pale white vessel,
A shell of a man awaiting the final strike,
But it doesn’t come.
You wait
And wait
And wait
For the misery to end
But it doesn’t
Nothing happens
You are left alone with only your madness to talk to.
All emotion spent, your body numbs.
You lose focus on reality, your mind slips into darkness.
The end never comes.
never…………….
Holy Fcuk!!!
That is really well written!!! Powerful too!
Should I be worried? you get the emotion across really well! Another one that I can relate too...hmm.
you might want to watch for spelling mistakes though!
Loves
Kit
FAR too depressing, man! I know that was how it was intended, but... well, how about you take a look from a different angle?
Check out the 'response' I've written...
life is not evil
its an obstacle course, full of helpful and non-helpful things
the poem is good and some what true, but its to down :( and angry!
cheer up:) and just maybe i'll kick life's *ss for ya ;p
ash
Much Love
Ashley