elemental forge

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2024

silence after rain,  
moors unveil rebirth softly,  
tears of renewal.


flickering firelight,  
dreams dance in ashes aglow,  
bushfire lessons burn.


veined stone in wind’s gale,  
shapes dance, bound’ries fade, souls merge,  
created within






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J-9thxciv's picture

I applaud your command of

I applaud your command of powerful imagery in this poem.  You are one of the achievers on this site.


J-9th94

redbrick's picture

Thank you kindly for your

Thank you kindly for your kind words and observation. I shall strive to improve further to achieve further and broader in this discipline. Of note as well, there are a couple of poems of late that deal with astronomy that I have posted that may be of pleasure to you. Cheers. Smile


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J-9thxciv's picture

Thank you for telling me.

Thank you for telling me.


J-9th94

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Oh yes, I do hope you enjoy

Oh yes, I do hope you enjoy them:

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/redbrick/poem/1124677 (a celestial journey)

 

and

 

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/redbrick/poem/1124762 (Hubbledy Crook) a little play on words in the title.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver