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Message in a Bottle

It floats down the river, 

like the feel of loneliness

and love: Save me please?

I'm stuck in an island,

filled with lies and deceit.

 

Digs digs digs digs digs, 

the graves of smiles.

Till one day, may i lie,

In the sands of this lonesome beach,

and die.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It's my first poem! O: I found it burried in a bottle back in my home country... but perhaps it should have remained, along with the sadness it kept.

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©20 April 2013 - 2:29pm — redacediamond
21 April 2013 - 4:16am — allets
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"...may i lie,/In the sands

"...may i lie,/In the sands of this lonesome beach..." I feel a sense of desolation so quiet and lost and alone. Brilliant penning this ~~A~~