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That ship is sinking, and the water looks cold
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Mindful A Moonlit Sonata,
a gleam, and a slash
of those emboldened
to try and live
vicariously through death.
a glass of merlot
a drop of blood
what a small price
you do your father proud
Expressing stark reality and crazy dreams laced with some philosopht is perhaps the aspiration of every writer. As for me, I am more of a poetry fan than a poet. But son, I will learn. God bless you
©bishu
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the way you put multi-layered ironies together. You have a poet's heart. Your father, beavis, will smile at such talent. Great title! ~ Stella. : )
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This one stirred in me a
This one stirred in me a spiritual protectiveness. I hate the title though I see a need for it beautifully crafted full bodied dry, yet profound aftertaste compelling opposing thoughts. this is a great one despite its clunky inelegant title. Top marks!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you! I enjoyed the
Thank you! I enjoyed the title myself! ;)
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