piece of peace

Hipocracy fills the world/swirled in democracy
Everything is an election/even the gods that be
we all crave the top/but what really is supremacy
Sure you could kill me/ but I dare you to live peacefully
Amongst people just like me/like we/this hatred gotta be stopping it
To everyone from the 3Rd world/ to the biggest metropolis
Everyone one of us gotta be halting this/preposterous vilence
To live as one/never done before why not try it
because it has to be earned/ you can't simply just buy it

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thanks roc!!! i want to come

thanks roc!!! i want to come up with a second verse and possibly a third, but havent tried it yet

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This

reminds me, in part, of my piece Oil Storm.
I'm utterly impressed
Excellent work, my friend.


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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nice work! How true! I

nice work! How true! I ain't buying either! ;) Hug$$ 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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thank you ssmoothie. ive been

thank you ssmoothie. ive been trying to come up with another verse. would you like to take a wack at it?

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i think its pretty great as

i think its pretty great as is but i give it a whack ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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yaaaaay ssmoothie

yaaaaay ssmoothie