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Someone could've saved her
A sad girl
she sits alone
in her room
holding the phone
she has a choice
she could call him
other choice is
to take a swim
add some concrete
to her legs
just to help her
escape from the pain
in her world
no one listens
she holds a knife
in the light it glistens
some one help her
someone save her
someone touch her
someone embrace her
shes crying for help now
shes crying from pain
shes dying cuz of him now
shes tired of living in vain
that sad girl
she could've been a hero
instead, her pulse
now reads zero
she blamed the world
for all her pain
this messed up world
that drove her insane
all those people
who claimed to have cared
now walk up to her open casket
and her pain they now shared
cause' now she's gone
gone from this cold, dark world
the world that unleashed it's pain
unto this sad, weak girl
i hope you're happy
for what you've done
you better prepare yourself
you better talk to your son
before all you've known and loved
is gone.
This is pretty powerful, you wrote it well.