Rape is wrong

If you're considering committing rape, please don't do it.

It causes a lot of pain and nobody deserves to go through it.

You wouldn't commit rape if you knew how it makes the victims feel.

They suffer tremendously and it takes a long time for them to heal.

If you're considering committing rape, I have a message for you and you better not ignore it.

Rape is wrong and evil and if you commit it, you will go to prison for it.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem is for anyone who's considering committing rape.

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This is really good, it is...just one small suggestion...try not to use so many its...I mean try maybe writing it again like this: (You honestly don't have to do this, take it and do what you want)

If you're considering rape, please don't do it
It causes a lot of pain that nobody deserves to go through
(I'll just omit the rhyming lines--they're good like that)
If you're considering committing rape (just seperate the lines, give or take it might read better)
I have a message for you and you better not ignore it
Rape is wrong and evil and if you commit it, (seperate the lines again)
You will go to prison for it

Just suggestions at your disposal...

Now if only more people would listen to that information!
Good read though all the same