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The Midnight Game
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Added in 2011 I am not really sure what I am writing
Only that there is this pain I am fighting
This urge inside to end it tonight,
To close the curtains and end the fight
The echo’s bounce from wall to wall
The chaos abounding from nothing at all
Is there centuries of mistakes inside my veins
Am I paying for those, or going insane?
Closing my eyes doesn’t help it at all
I see the image of death inside my fall
As my eyelids close the movie begins
So either way the darkness wins
Will I sleep tonight, I don’t think so
I just got up only moments ago
Theres an emptiness calling out my name
Mina, wake up its time to play
Leave me alone, or please let me die
But here in the silence.. I can only cry..
wow.. I love this
wow.. I love this piece!!
"Closing my eyes doesn’t help it at all
I see the image of death inside my fall"
is by far the best two lines don't ask me why but they just jumped out at me on the page!! and I can relate to this piece so well..
I am glad you like it. For me
I am glad you like it. For me I like the last two,
Leave me alone, or please let me die
But here in the silence.. I can only cry..
I feel that all of the emotion hits its peak here in the last two lines. I have also noticed that in most of your work I fancy the last few lines.. Maybe I am a last few liners girl LOL
Thanks again!
awww :) well the whole thing
awww :) well the whole thing just stands out but yeah I kinda noticed that just now too thats cool though :)